Firstly, it is far too long. The shots at the beginning after about a minute long, and I do not want this to be a short film and more importantly, bore my audience.
Therefore these will be shorted as much as possible, perhaps up to 25 seconds.
Secondly, the first shots are all of the same woman, doing the same thing. It is neither scary or entertaining. I have decided to insert some short shots of what she is talking about. One of these a close-up of a tied down hand trying to break free with rage. This should break the sequence up and make it scarier!
New storyboards 5-8. Every numbered storyboard after 8 will now be n+4, were n is the original number.
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